Hey guys, I'm looking to brew something as close to this recipe as possible. My biggest constraint right now (apart from SWMBO

) is a small boiling pot, so I was going to try this as a restricted extract/kit brew. I was wondering if you could take a look at the following procedure/extract to see if this might produce something at least drinkable?
Before I get into the recipe I just wanted to offer a general thanks to all on this (and other) forums who spend so much time giving free advice...the international homebrew culture seems incredibly generous and helpful, so thanks in advance!
My Plan:
Steep grains:
200g Crystal Malt (120 ebc) @ 65c (?) for approx. 1 hour, in grain bag
Remove grains, bring to boil.
Add 25g Cascade Hops, 15 min left; adding IrishMoss also 15min left.
Compose Wort:
1.7kg Coopers English Bitter
1kg Light DME
(300g demerrara sugar)*maybe
mix in malted/hopped wort
add water to 22L
pitch s-04 yeast
Fermentation plan:
1 Week primary (about 20c)
transfer to second FV for secondary (maybe add muslin bag of 25g Cascade hops for dry hopping)
1 Week secondary (about 20c)
Bottling:
Batch prime with (unsure of correct quantity!)* mixture of Light DME and Demerrara sugar
1 Week room temp (about 20c)
3 - 4 (I'm assuming it won't really last more than 4 weeks) Cold temperature.
So...
Right away I see a problem with this recipe, in that I purchased a darker crystal malt than I thought (120 ebc...so dark!), and I've got very floral hops with the cascade (aa 6.8%) and light DME.
I sense this beer would lack identity, trying to be too many things at once. On the other hand I would like a unique beer: I like the body and maltiness of british ales, but I love american hoppyness.... I'm also unsure if safale s-04 would be able to handle this (and whether to rehydrate: obviously better for the wee yeasties, but I've heard it's a bit hit/miss for beginners to rehydrate correctly).
The reason I went a bit overboard (extra grains, hops, DME) is that I really want as high quality as possible, instead of something mediocre. I'd rather make a brew that was good quality, but strange tasting, than one of poor quality but decent flavour.
Sorry for the wall of text. If you made it to the bottom let me know of any advice you might give to help me focus this beer. (any general advice would also be appreciated).
Thanks all!